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Paper Heart

What does love mean to you?
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// f u l l // v i e w //

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For the Paper Heart movie poster contest
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Theme: What does love mean to you?
In select theaters August 7th.
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I didn't run it through spell check because I forgot, so keep an eye out for those. And this is my first time doing typography.
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THIS IS NOT A STOCK! MINE! NOT YOURS! YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO USE/DISTRIBUTE THIS IMAGE.

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Critiques


:iconboogieboylock:
Nice concept! And I like the typeface you chose for it.

Just a few nit-picky things - I think it would be nice if the text was filling the entire space, instead of being staggered at the right there. And I think all of the black text is overpowering the "Paper Heart" and other important phrases. Maybe you could flip the colors? or choose a more powerful color for those phrases?

The thumbnail looked very busy, but enlarged I think it works. Perhaps just the change of color for those certain words would help. But you might use a larger font size, see what it looks like?

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:iconneumn13:
wow, pretty clever. I like it!! :)

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VISIT PLEASE! :D (youtube.com/neumn13) ([link])

“If only I was perfect.”

“I am misunderstood for being understanding.”

“Dreams are only for when you are sleeping.”
:iconmyxchemicalxkiss:
Thanks! :)

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You're that tree falling in the forest that nobody gives a rat's ass about.

Since change is constant, you wonder if people crave death because it's the only way they can get anything really finished.

-Survivor
, Chuck Palahniuk
:iconemdog56:
Singing out of key = my fav. :)

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:batman:
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ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ
:iconneumn13:
youre welcome! :)

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VISIT PLEASE! :D (youtube.com/neumn13) ([link])

“If only I was perfect.”

“I am misunderstood for being understanding.”

“Dreams are only for when you are sleeping.”
:iconmyxchemicalxkiss:
One of mine, too. Thanks. :)

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You're that tree falling in the forest that nobody gives a rat's ass about.

Since change is constant, you wonder if people crave death because it's the only way they can get anything really finished.

-Survivor
, Chuck Palahniuk
:iconparanku-mingyuan:
My favorite is 'eyelashes on cheeks'. Also, just pointing out you spelled 'dandelions' wrong. I love it though! :aww:

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Hughes: Hey, I've got a message from Roy… He said, "Don't die under my command, you're enough of a pain without the paperwork." That was it.
Ed: Tell him fine, there's no way I'm dying before you do, you morally bankrupt Colonel with a God complex.
~ FMA
:iconmyxchemicalxkiss:
Yea, I'm sure I spelt a whole bunch of things wrong. I'm glad you like it. :)

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You're that tree falling in the forest that nobody gives a rat's ass about.

Since change is constant, you wonder if people crave death because it's the only way they can get anything really finished.

-Survivor
, Chuck Palahniuk
:iconblacparade:
thinking about entering this contest also...saw a few that are really nice. then i saw yours. IF i consider entering still...i will probably end up hoping you get a prize. this is so true and cute and my most favorite one is the singing off key. listening to someone who can't carry a tune sing their heart out and still wanting to smother them in kisses is some true love...
:)
trust me haha

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:iconparanku-mingyuan:
Oh, well, I only found two spelling mistakes :P I like your photography too. :D

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Hughes: Hey, I've got a message from Roy… He said, "Don't die under my command, you're enough of a pain without the paperwork." That was it.
Ed: Tell him fine, there's no way I'm dying before you do, you morally bankrupt Colonel with a God complex.
~ FMA
:iconmyxchemicalxkiss:
Thank you.

Agreed! :)


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You're that tree falling in the forest that nobody gives a rat's ass about.

Since change is constant, you wonder if people crave death because it's the only way they can get anything really finished.

-Survivor
, Chuck Palahniuk

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