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Critiques
Just a few nit-picky things - I think it would be nice if the text was filling the entire space, instead of being staggered at the right there. And I think all of the black text is overpowering the "Paper Heart" and other important phrases. Maybe you could flip the colors? or choose a more powerful color for those phrases?
The thumbnail looked very busy, but enlarged I think it works. Perhaps just the change of color for those certain words would help. But you might use a larger font size, see what it looks like?
Well Done!!!
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